First Version
My name is Rosana and I'm currently studying language at the Universidade Federal de Minas Gerais as a complement to my purpose of becoming a teacher. I'm in the fifyth semester in the university and during the period I stayed there, I have got some interesting experiences that changed my life in general. I really believe that in this course you can improve not only your english or your teaching skills, but also you can become a better human being, more conscious and productive. I intend to try another course when I finish my experience on FALE, because I want to spread my knowledgment areas. I studied for a moment of my life Spanish, but it was so many years ago. At the university, I decided not to focus only on English, but also to explore others languages in order to increase oportunities, especially in my academic life
Second Version
My name is Rosana and I'm currently studying language at the Universidade Federal de Minas Gerais as a complement to my purpose of becoming a teacher. I'm in the fifyth semester in the university and during the period I stayed there, I have gotten some interesting experiences that changed my life in general. I really believe that in this course you can improve not only your english or your teaching skills, but also you can become a better human being, more conscious and productive. I intend to try another course when I finish my experience on FALE, because I want to spread my knowledgment areas. I studied Spanish for a moment of my life, but it was many years ago. At the university, I decided not to focus only on English, but also to explore others languages in order to increase oportunities, especially in my academic life. Third Version My name is Rosana and I am currently studying Languages at the Universidade Federal de Minas Gerais as a complement to my purpose of becoming a teacher. I am in the fifth semester and, during this period, I had gotten(this is too informal, remove, please)some interesting experiences that changed my life in general. I really believe that in this major you can improve not only your English or your teaching skills, but also you can become a better human being, more productive and conscious of your powerful function in society. I intend to try(change to: take) another major when I finish my experience at FALE, because I want to spread my personal knowledge areas(this is still not good. Suggestion: because I would like to have academic knowledge in more than one specific area.)I studied Spanish for a while,but it was many years ago. During my major, I decided not to focus only on English, but also to explore other languages in order to(include: expand my future)oportunities, especially concerning my academic life.
First Version
My name is Rosana and I'm currently studying language at the Universidade Federal de Minas Gerais as a complement to my purpose of becoming a teacher. I'm in the fifyth semester in the university and during the period I stayed there, I have got some interesting experiences that changed my life in general. I really believe that in this course you can improve not only your english or your teaching skills, but also you can become a better human being, more conscious and productive. I intend to try another course when I finish my experience on FALE, because I want to spread my knowledgment areas. I studied for a moment of my life Spanish, but it was so many years ago. At the university, I decided not to focus only on English, but also to explore others languages in order to increase oportunities, especially in my academic life
Second Version
My name is Rosana and I'm currently studying language at the Universidade Federal de Minas Gerais as a complement to my purpose of becoming a teacher. I'm in the fifyth semester in the university and during the period I stayed there, I have gotten some interesting experiences that changed my life in general. I really believe that in this course you can improve not only your english or your teaching skills, but also you can become a better human being, more conscious and productive. I intend to try another course when I finish my experience on FALE, because I want to spread my knowledgment areas. I studied Spanish for a moment of my life, but it was many years ago. At the university, I decided not to focus only on English, but also to explore others languages in order to increase oportunities, especially in my academic life.
Third Version
My name is Rosana and I am currently studying Languages at the Universidade Federal de Minas Gerais as a complement to my purpose of becoming a teacher. I am in the fifth semester and, during this period, I had gotten (this is too informal, remove, please)some interesting experiences that changed my life in general. I really believe that in this major you can improve not only your English or your teaching skills, but also you can become a better human being, more productive and conscious of your powerful function in society. I intend to try (change to: take) another major when I finish my experience at FALE, because I want to spread my personal knowledge areas (this is still not good. Suggestion: because I would like to have academic knowledge in more than one specific area.) I studied Spanish for a while,but it was many years ago. During my major, I decided not to focus only on English, but also to explore other languages in order to (include: expand my future) oportunities, especially concerning my academic life.